Destroying Avalon Essay

(1) The pseudonym AFriend is ironic because the person by this name is non a friend however a bully which is sending Avalon messages about what the other girls think of her at school.(3) Being overwhelmed by the content of the email is quite normal for Avalon mainly because it was suggesting that she was not liked and that she was be bullied.(5) Avalons parents have positive attitudes and strong values towards education as their both teachers.(7) Mitch seem to be nice and golden towards Avalon, as with Caleb who is the surfer laid back guy that treats Avalon in a friendly way.(9) Avalons bag was sabotaged following the netball match as a pr consummationical joke and harassment for Avalon it was one(a) of the starting things they have done.Destroying Avalon (SHEET 3 ALL)Marshall conceptualises Avalon can pull through the bullying which he has faced, unless believes he may not be able to take much bullying as he was being beaten up.In the Chapter the Liverpool kiss the gender ste reotypes are challenged as Tamara knocks Bretts lights out, it shows that she is a strong, undismayed person, not afraid of any strong guy.Avalon told her parents everything as she had lost control over her emotions and let everything spud out, she thought that it would be the right time to tell them.In chapter the eye of destruction, I believe Marshall is inside, huddled inhis room afraid of the bullies re cut intoing, afraid to leave his room.Marshals dying is unexpected I was very confused. I thought no such thing would happen as he was very strong for Avalon.The use of repetition brings a sad realization of how horrible this act was, it brings Avalon horror and impact on her emotions, as death is a strong word, we would all act powerfully with emotion towards it.Avalon blames herself as she believed the bullies only targeted Marshall as she ignored their attempts of her, thus finding a parvenue prey.We learn from Marshalls mother, that Marshall was a up and going young kid w hen in primary, excited for High School and always seemed to be contented.DATE OFENTRYFORMAT(Consider font,size, style, page coiffure etc.)LANGUAGEAND STYLE(Sentencestructure, vocab,repetition etc)EVENTSJanuary 15Small create verballyExpresses his emotions and feelingsHis dad leavesFebruary 25Small writingAbout his feelingsHe got embarrassed in front of the class.March 6Normal writingExpresses his emotions get bullied by Todd and his mates.May 13Capital letters, bold writing.About his feelings and emotionsHe hates himself and wants to die.Avalon had been guilty of judging Alice the wholly time jumping to the conclusion that weather it was her or not, Avalon ended up feeling regretful later. bow aboveCharacter Alias (THEY ARE DEVELOPED THROUGH-OUT THE ENTRIES)Alice a mean, heartless, popular girl who cared for nothing and had no heartTamara thinking she was a very odd and scary looking person ( unfriendly)Marshal alertJeremy a friendly easy-going guyAvalon will move on positiv ely from her torment proving Marshals prophecy correct, but she will never forget the friend she lost.Alice turned the popular girls against her, this in turn turned most other people against her, and she did play a major role against Avalon but did not make up lies or rumors.Dragon Girl did not want to lose Avalon as a friend as she had with Alice, she has always lost to the popular girls and thus she turned everyone against her so Avalon would stay in the group and not leave them.It would have been easier to know that Alice was Dragon Girl as Avalon already dislike her, Dragon Girl would have just increased her anger and rageI noticed Avalon was subject to a wide range of emotions and situations, which differed to what she wouldve faced in the country, but I believe this was hard for her at first but she soon adapted and her personality andmental strength increase dramatically. She proved to be a very strong and caring person then many believe she could ever be.